Sunday, February 13, 2011

Out My Window

Out my window I can see quite a lot of interesting things. I can see the courtyard, the parsley ravenously reaching out for more room to grow into; (sadly it's work gets washed away into a delicious pesto); the front door, it's bells being thrown around carelessly by the wind; the sliding door slightly ajar, curtains flying through to be blocked by a pair of roman sandals; the waves crashing high against the seaside rocks, spittle spraying even higher. That's the view from my window.

By Laura

10 comments:

  1. I do like the view from your window especially the description of the sea. I think I will try this activity with Room 3. It gets you thinking about the world around us. Wonderful!

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  2. A great description that made think about the seaside and wish I was there, well done.

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  3. I wish I was there I really liked the part of the sea.

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  4. A nice description that you did there, well done.

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  5. Wow cool story I love it so much.

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  6. Great description and it is really detailed :) well done.

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  7. I like how you wrote a good description, I can picture it in my head.

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  8. That was a good paragraph it made me think I was really there.

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  9. I really like your descriptive writing. It creates an image in my head. Awesome!!!!!!

    = )

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  10. Love your nice description on the sea.

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